Just Beyond the Moon

Shoulders hunched at a 45 degree angle, he wasn’t the 6′ tall man he used to be. But we always reported his height and weight, 6′, 190lbs, anytime someone asked. Never mind his bent spine made him shorter than that. Never mind. My dad was tall and strong–I didn’t need science on my side. My brain said my dad was tall and strong.

It is Wednesday night in Shawnee, Oklahoma, the city where this dad of mine was born on February 18, 1925. I’m listening to the oxygen tank kick on and off while I hear his labored breathing. The tank sounds oddly like the air compressors he used when he was working. Back when sawdust reminded me of my dad. Back when he laughed when he shot a nail gun and Dorothy and I jumped three feet in the air. “Dammit dad”, we said. “Please yell ‘fire in the hole’, before you shoot that thing!” He loved his daughters learning “the trade” but it tickled him when we were afraid of his nail gun. And ladders. And roof work. We weren’t great apprentices, my sisters and I. Thank goodness his three sons followed his trade.

Now the oxygen tank kicks on and off and my dad’s labored breathing can be heard just beyond. It is Wednesday. Last Thursday my husband and I took him to several appointments and to buy a new wheelchair. He was on top of the world last Thursday. He said we kidnapped him and he was more than willing to be kidnapped on the next day but we were leaving town and couldn’t oblige. Last Thursday he ate 12 McNuggets on the way home from his kidnapping. Today he can’t eat or drink.

Sepsis, heart attack, blood clot…”nothing we can do”, came word from the doctor. My mom has been with my dad for 72 years. How can she hear “Nothing we can do?” There’s always something. DO SOMETHING!

Another doctor agrees there’s nothing they can do. They send my father home on hospice care. Little Heidi, his precious dachshund, gazes at us wildly when we come inside the house. She wants on his hospital bed which is placed now where the dining table used to sit. She smells his breath, sits on him and licks him endlessly. Dogs know. People are less perceptive.

My brother calls to say, maybe dad will have a better day tomorrow and he’ll sit up and drink a protein shake. Heidi has already told me, this is the end. My limited survival training kicks in and I remember: You can survive 3 days without water, 3 weeks without food. Heidi senses: he’s not had water for two days. She senses there aren’t better days. I believe Heidi.

How to feel? Sorry, sad? Grateful for having a dad for 54 years? Worried for my mother now? Just what is the “proper” way to feel when your dad is on oxygen, hooked up to a catheter, coughing and heavily drugged for pain? How do you feel when you can’t fix this?

I am “sleeping” on the couch at mom and dad’s house tonight. What happens when his pain is too great? Am I the right person to administer drugs every two hours? I don’t want my dad to die on my watch but you only have 3 days to live without water and he’s just slipped into day 2. My dad will die on my watch.

The night draws on and we slip into Thursday. Day 3 without water. Heidi is now huddled close to me on the couch. The oxygen tank continues its windup and hiss. My dad’s breathing becomes more and more labored and sometimes he cries in pain. My mom sleeps in their bed alone.

Morning came, my sisters and brother arrived. My dad would die but not solely on my watch. I am grateful for this. My dad took his last breath before 1:00pm just as the music box finished playing his chosen song.

I remember when you said you’d never leave me

Through these golden years I’ve kept the same vow too

But now that I am going please don’t leave me

I’ll walk just beyond the moon then I’ll stop and wait for you

You can look up every night and you’ll see me light the light

Where I’ll watch for you to join me someday soon

We’ll go lookin’ through the stars for the heaven that is ours

And I know we’ll find it soon somewhere just beyond the moon

I’ll just sit there on a star and watch you from afar

Till I see you walking toward me someday soon

Then together hand in hand we’ll find our promised land

And we’ll settle down forever darlin’ just beyond the moon

I don’t need science on my side. He was 6′ tall, 190 pounds. He was tall and strong. And he is waiting for my mom just beyond the moon.


  1. You my darling are my rock star and my strength. Thank you for letting me be part of your family. I love your dad and I will always cherish the time I spent with him. May his seas be calm and the wind always at his back. lybd

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  2. I have just gone through the similar experience except my father had a stroke and was gone in a split second. It gave us no time to assess the situation that it still feels surreal. I wish I could say something to helpful to you, but I myself is in limbo.

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    1. I think I am grateful for the slow decline over the last nine months. It helped prepare the mind. I’m very sorry for your loss and heartbreak. Thank you for commenting.

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    1. Thank you, Sommer. It’s good to hear from you. I hope things are well with you. My dad was awesome but I’m happy he is finally at peace.


  3. Aunt Alison, thank you for capturing his spirit and stoicism so eloquently. I know how difficult that must have been to write and you said it beautifully. I’m sure he was taller than 6′, had to be closer to 7′ in my mind 🙂 and quite surely a man that loved his family to the moon and back, so the song completely brought on the ugly cry, and I’m very glad I read this in private. Being a Pierman is quite a badge of pride and honor and I cherish all the stories, the memories and tall tales. Glad he is free of pain, but wishing there was always more time. Until then, I’ll look to the moon. I bet he fancies it up with a cowboy hat and some boots! Much love and thanks for sharing your heart.

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    1. You will never know how much you touched me with your comment. He probably was closer to 7′ tall now that you mention it. I will never see the moon quite the same. We miss you. Love you!


  4. Even in times of great pain, your eloquence shines through. At 6′ tall and 190 pounds your father was a gentle giant. And you, my dear, are a Pierman. Here’s to peace and tranquility just beyond the moon…and future reunions!

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